twilight tiger

" C arolyn, a woman of sweet smile Embroidered upon an angelic face Whose charms can echo even a mile With a warm and tender embrace. A lways caring and ...

love it! love it! love it! :D thats all i have to say. It sounded really good, it flowed real nicely, and overall, i just loved it =P I liked ...

I really liked this. It was so sweet and everything at the beginning. With you two falling for each other based on hands. I liked the title too, but I ...

this was written really well! :D I rather enjoyed reading it, it had a nice pattern and flow to it. The short two first lines, followed by the last a ...

I liked this poem. the chorus sounding part, it made it interesting to find. Made it seem like a song. Was that how it was meant? if so, it was ...

You're right. Too many The's. I'm going to change that, thanks for the suggestion ^^ I will also take a look at the number of times I use "storm/storminess" sometimes, ...

thank you. This review just made me want to write more to the story. Hope to see you here again soon

This is written really well. I like the rhythm, and the flow. Even though you went off for a while without really rhyming the words, it still went. And that, ...

"the one who controls when I take a piss" that made me laugh. =D i liked that poem. the sadness and emotion in it. The style and organization. All were ...

It was so cute and emotional ^^ When I first read about a week ago, I wasn't sure what it was about. I don't know why, but I thought it ...

great poem. i liked how everything related to the title and it was all metaphors. For, what is life without metaphors? right? =P I liked the way you rhymed it ...

I liked the way she couldn't forget about Whisper, then bam! He appears in the same club as her. Really nice twist. I also like the fact that many supernatural ...

this kept me absorbed! I loved it! the detail, the writing, the way you stuck only to the stuff about the fighting. It was amazing. I only saw about two ...

wow. I read this and was just like, wow. It was wonderful. I liked how the first three lines would rhyme, then the fourth would go into more detail about ...

Revised about twice based on people's suggestions. Tell me what ya think ^_^ *** Outside, the rain pounded loudly against the window of the dark room. "The warmth of the ...